Nice start, Kaitlyn! The "Orange Bomb" is very shrewd and funny! The one with the dollar signs (fusion) works conceptually, but because there is so much white (negative space), we tend to lose the important identifying parts of the orange. I'd suggest using a much heavier font and putting the dollar signs closer together. The subtractive orange works as an exercise, but I cannot read what the missing shape or remain shape represents... Is it a random shape? At any rate, you're off to a good start!
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Nice start, Kaitlyn! The "Orange Bomb" is very shrewd and funny! The one with the dollar signs (fusion) works conceptually, but because there is so much white (negative space), we tend to lose the important identifying parts of the orange. I'd suggest using a much heavier font and putting the dollar signs closer together. The subtractive orange works as an exercise, but I cannot read what the missing shape or remain shape represents... Is it a random shape? At any rate, you're off to a good start!
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